Update: evolution of a performance

One of the central poems in my show is 'You're fucking dead LOL J/K', a poem which gives the bantzmen a little of their own medicine and invites them to laugh it off. I have, previously, tried doing this in a very angry style, as you can see here. But recently I've been thinking of doing it in something of a...different way. So feast your eyes, if you will, on the new version: